i like how you have taking the idea of being able to fold upn the leaflet to make it stand up and the colours of the leaflet you have know. The idea of making kids come into the candy shop is quite good but might scare the younger people so over all i would give this a level 5b the pink and green work well togetherv but the rest stands out but not in a very good way.And the information you have gave on the leaflet is very vague on what you sell. by louis mitchell
i like how you have taking the idea of being able to fold upn the leaflet to make it stand up and the colours of the leaflet you have know. The idea of making kids come into the candy shop is quite good but might scare the younger people so over all i would give this a level 5b the pink and green work well togetherv but the rest stands out but not in a very good way.And the information you have gave on the leaflet is very vague on what you sell. by louis mitchell
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